Not bad.
This was pretty enjoyable. I like Macbeth, and I LOVE final fantasy, so this was pretty good. Although, if you're going to do more, I have a few suggestions. First, gets some voice actors. If you're doing anything Shakespeare, there is way too much stuff being said to read it. There was way too much to read in this. Also, try having a little more going on. The last part was extremely boring, when they just stood, didn't move, and you had to read everything. Other than that, this was OK for a first try. Try to fix the things I mentioned, and I bet you really could do the entire play.